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by crusty2005 @ 2006-06-21 - 19:24:32

dreming about sleepless days
talking about talkative moments
forgetting about unforgetable seconds
touching the buttons of the piano
we used to play a lot,
until we learnt how to get away


 
 

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MohanaranganVMohanaranganV [Member]
08/22/06 @ 20:20

The come back of the refrain, 'we used to play' is good and the crust is split nicely by putting it as if all the while learning from the piano 'how to part away'. Please do write more.

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